Magazine -
The magazine on the left was the first draft of the magazine, the feedback I received from teachers and peers was that the top of the magazine was fine how it was and didn't need to be changed so I left it the same on the finished product. The first bit of criticism I changed was the placement of the title of the film and the other small headline, I moved them down so the main image could be seen better, this was feedback I got from one of my teachers. I was also told that changing the three bars at the bottom left was a good idea which i acted upon by changing the middle one to look like it had been blood splattered which links into the genre of the film the magazine is about as it is a thriller. It also makes it look a bit more professional. The final bit of feedback I acted upon was to increase the size of the red circle and to reduce the size of the barcode. This is to draw the audiences attention to the important red circle advertisement rather than the barcode
Poster -
Some of the changes that I made to the poster due to audience feedback was that I enlarged the centre image so that the main character was easier to see due to it already being quite low key lighting, I also had the knife and motto higher up the page but moving that down after getting feedback from my teacher allowed the centre imagine to be more open. I also got told to make the block of writing smaller which I also did to allow more space for the title etc.
Trailer -
The main criticism was the pace of the trailer, due to this we sped up the pace to make it seem more like a thriller trailer. we did this by chopping up several shots and adding more into the gaps to make it seem more sped up. Another criticism we recieved was about the final title not having a coming soon so we decided to add this afterwards.
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