This was the first draft of the magazine cover for my film. The feedback I got back was that the mast head and surrounding aspects such as the main picture and date etc was fine. The two blocks of words were slightly too high and distracted from the main image so I was informed to move them down. The circle in the bottom right was too small, while the bar code was slightly too big and distracting. Finally, the three red bars looked slightly out of place since they were all equal lengths and should be changed a bit. These were all amended in the second draft below.
This is the magazine after the feedback was taken into consideration and changed.
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